Dude

Nice Job man how did u create this one slow it down or just flat record it on keyboard an throw it into FL

Nice

Its good and has a lot of potential as a song. Try not using so much distorition and then your melodies can come out. The song has good ideas in it just needs to be cleared up. Also its repetitive. Go back and try to figure out a new theme that will make it stand out more.

Good Job

Cool

Try some other tones in this song. Go back and reedit and see if you have more flowing techno pads or tones that work better together and are not so up there in the octaves because you have good harmonic structure but just need to clear it out with yuor choice of sounds. Very Very well made though props. Example like during the melody you have this huge High part that sticks out of the main melody. Its like that kid who wants attention and tries to get it by screaming and being out there. When the highs went away I found it to be a better listening experiance.

GOOD JOB