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It was cool at the start, you had the first bass part then just kept adding which is cool. The best thing I can say to change would be take down the level of audio on the first bass line so that the new elements are heard better. The voice sorta fits might want to consider changing it to something deeper to fit with the bass theme. Original theme actual techno song with a theme and plot to the form. Kinda reminds me of the soccer practice song(not the gay theme just the sound). Overall cool sounds like a good house mix. if it wasn't for the weird lyrics it probebly could be played in a club, ohh and faster tempo. Good JOb

snayk responds:

Thanks for the review!

I love adding stuff on to a main melody/beat. I'm not sure about lowering the gain on that main bass, though - it sounds fine to me, but I understand what you're getting at.

The original vocals ARE deeper (I think it's obvious), but my voice sounded really monotone. I didn't feel like recording another take because the timing was really good, so I just raised the pitch. I actually like the higher voice.

I have no idea what the soccer practice song is.

Hahaha, weird lyrics or original lyrics? I could have gone the standard route and sung about dancing or sex or drugs or rock and roll (like my last submission), but I felt like doing something different, and these were the first lyrics to pop into my head when I started recording vocals.

I don't think the tempo really needs to be adjusted. Typically, my songs are 140 BPM, but dance songs actually have lower tempos than you may think - 132 BPM is not uncommon for a dance song. This song is 130, but it's not REALLY a dance song as much as a fun electro song.

Thanks again.